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All Deviations
All Deviations


when i'm spending time with you
everything is right
but when we are apart
i don't know how i feel inside

i see your smile and hear your words
but should i give in and believe?
or is there something else you want
that's hidden underneath?

don't break me this time (i'm already in pieces)
don't lie and deceive me (i can handle the truth)
don't make me cry (i'm fragile inside)
don't leave me here all alone (i'm so afraid)

your eyes speak to me softly
begging me to stay,
but i'm scared of being hurt.
so i turn and run away.

i want to follow my heart
to wherever it could lead me,
but my fears are overwhelming.
can i let you in?

don't break me this time (i'm already in pieces)
don't lie and deceive me (i can handle the truth)
don't make me cry (i'm fragile inside)
don't leave me here alone (i'm afraid, so ashamed)

broken, so worn down and beaten
crying, so lonely and frightened

torn between emotion and fears
torn between emotion and fears

break me
deceive me
hurt me, and
leave me

i've pushed you away
so, why do you stay?

don't break me this time (you're holding me together)
don't lie and deceive me (i couldn't see the truth)
don't make me cry (you make me stronger)
don't leave me here so alone (i'm not so afraid anymore)

not so afraid
when you hold me in your arms
©2006-2008 ~DeepPurpleTears
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written a while ago.
i think i was in a strange mood.
i don't really like this 'cause the rhythm is off...
but tell me what you think.
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~lupins-wolvesbain:iconlupins-wolvesbain: Aug 5, 2006, 9:32:26 AM
omg.....*sniffle* sooo beautiful. wow. tht really reminds me of *sighs* too bad the one i love won't hold me in his arms....

when i'm spending time with you
everything is right
but when we are apart
i don't know how i feel inside

thatr line certinly aplies......everything feels so rigt...and then...there's confusio and pain..lonlieness. only....my person dosen't stay...because he loves another. ohh well....thts life i guess

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just becaus i don't listen to the voices in my head dosen't mean i won't hurt you
~DeepPurpleTears:iconDeepPurpleTears: Aug 5, 2006, 11:30:26 PM
exactly. my person lives far away. i'm sorry you've experienced something like this. it sucks. :hug:

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our life is what our thoughts make it

i am; therefore, i think
~Endallia:iconEndallia: Aug 7, 2006, 2:37:40 PM
This would make an amazing song.
Wonderful.

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You're not a very intellectual person-that would explain why you are so bored.
~CruelestCut:iconCruelestCut: Aug 7, 2006, 7:47:27 PM
dear gods, i've experienced something like that O.o

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:jsenn::blackrose:~ I play for keeps. Go ahead, win my soul. ~:blackrose::jsenn:

~ Some cuts are just too cruel...~

~ Jeg er Asher og jeg elsker min Linda. <3
~DeepPurpleTears:iconDeepPurpleTears: Aug 8, 2006, 8:36:57 AM
why thank you my dear! :hug:

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our life is what our thoughts make it

i am; therefore, i think
~DeepPurpleTears:iconDeepPurpleTears: Aug 8, 2006, 8:37:50 AM
it kinda sucks doesn't it?

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our life is what our thoughts make it

i am; therefore, i think
~Endallia:iconEndallia: Aug 8, 2006, 10:06:52 AM
your welcome my friend.

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You're not a very intellectual person-that would explain why you are so bored.
~Nobodysfool10490:iconNobodysfool10490: Aug 8, 2006, 11:01:41 PM
AHHH i love this one. it really hit home and again, was well written and beautiful. eerr i wish i could think of better comments but im so tired right now lol but this is deff a fav :) :+fav:

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"He who fights with monsters might take care lest he thereby become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you."-Friedrich Nietzsche


On the edge of the world, she'd rather jump than just look down...
~DeepPurpleTears:iconDeepPurpleTears: Aug 9, 2006, 1:04:48 AM
thanks again babe...mucho!

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our life is what our thoughts make it

i am; therefore, i think